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Forum Home » Be Gentle » Comedy of Man: Please Respond

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12/19/2011 1:17:03 AM

Jeron Adams
Posts: 3
The evil of the elders,
Will torture the loving mind.
With the passing of their ways.
Their old age divine.
Truth and innocence are snuffed,
As the ignorance transcends.
The most poignant part maybe;
Shall the world be blind ‘til the end?
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12/20/2011 12:55:06 PM

fred bell
Posts: 1
very good and your right
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