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12/17/2020 12:35:00 AM
Peter Dougal
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If the world were but an ocean
and Love our precious boat
Then what are life's true values
and would we really float?
But what of us my friend
yes, what of you and me?
Are we just marooned lovers
or pirates without a sea?
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12/23/2020 5:13:00 PM
Rose Petals
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My gosh that is good I know this is a critique forum but I personally think that poem is perfect in every which way so I thought I'd just say that.
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