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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
10/3/2020 11:15:34 PM

Peter Dougal
Posts: 6
My home, my planet is a living thing
And Mother Nature her Eternity Ring
The miracles of life, decay and re-birth
Leave me in wonder and love for this Earth
This delicate balance is hard to maintain
And neglect and pollution are causing her pain
All is not well, our Mother is ill
And there is no medicine or magical pill
People need confess and tend to her plight
For we are the virus and the parasite
edited by Dougal on 10/3/2020
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