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9/24/2020 3:11:59 PM

christine Bridges
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Sprite, Sprite sucking light
Siphoning thoughts and might

Who is watching
To determine your border?
What mind will expose you?
Who will betray me?

Where did you come from?

Is it original sin

Or some closer?
Is their purpose in
Your gravity?

Who will lift her head and cease accusing?
From whence cometh my help?

Jehovah Rapha
I settle in your palm.

You are greater than the Sprite.
I rest in You
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