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11/3/2011 9:46:15 AM

pummy sharma
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There is love at first sight,

I had heard.

But, now I realized,

For I have seen you.

Your face;

So simple,

But very difficult to,

Stop looking at.

I don’t know,

Whether it is love;

Just an attraction,

Or a light of fraction.


Whether to flow,

Or keep it to glow,

In my damn stupid mind.

Now it is up to you,

Who has to decide?

Whether to live in pride,

Or be a lover of mine.


Very small and time very short,

For hatred to cake,

And innocent heart to break.
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