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should i write poetry in this style?
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6/22/2020 11:39:42 PM
Kora Carter
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Opening my eyes
is more painful
than staying as sleep forever
sleeping beauty was in a dreaming wonderland
i was jealous of that
now ive grown
i still fall everyday
learning to get back up
staying down out
is easier than waking up
in the real world
i cant just wish upon a star
edited by kora0304 on 6/22/2020
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