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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
6/9/2020 3:16:55 PM
Rose Petals
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Kindness is a warm smile,
From someone you don't know,
Kindness is a endless cycle,
Receiving some only makes yours grow,
Kindness is a dollar given,
To a charity you just saw,
Kindness is telling someone their drawing looks great,
When they don't know how to draw,
Kindness hides in rocky canyons,
Alleyways and deserted halls,
Even if you blocked yourself in,
Kindness can go through walls,
It won't melt away in the heat of summer,
Or freeze to death in the icy cold,
Kindness and a penny,
Are worth more than gold.
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6/9/2020 3:18:31 PM
Rose Petals
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Ummm..so..I know this is the high critique forum but since this is contructive criticisem can you please critique kindly?
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