Poetry Forum

Forum Home » Be Gentle » A poem titled Down To Earth

Post here if you're new to receiving a critique and you want "gentle" feedback on your poem. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!

4/24/2020 3:20:39 PM Mario Walker Posts: 4	My legacy as a person is I want people to say I was real down to earth. A rare breed, a true one of a kind. I want to be the exception to humanity The opposite of ego and vanity I want to be that person who you feel at ease with. I want my character traits to resemble Christ: Someone who was kind, loyal, trustworthy, disciplined, respectful, humble, and honest. The person you can sit and vent to, the person who will give you money when you're in need, a person who will go out of his way to make sure you are ok. That's the kind of person I want to be remembered for.
	• permalink • reply with quote
6/22/2020 11:28:57 PM Kora Carter Posts: 2	its a great start to poetry! -- K_C*
	• permalink • reply with quote