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10/27/2011 8:12:38 PM
Derek Beegle Posts: 1
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There I stood. Near the edge of a cliff overlooking the cascading waterfall. Only it wasn't water flowing over the point of no return. They were my memories in a simpler form. So, there I sat. catching parts of my life. Memories forgotten, memories cherished, memories locked away. I laughed at that one time, I blushed at another. I remembered you, and you. After sometime, something then happened that I didn't expect. There was no more water, no more memories . So, there I walked, over to the edge. As I looked over the edge a smile overcame my face. What did I see you ask. Well while I was watching my life go over the edge. I was actually just watching my life fall into place. ever so perfectly.
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