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1/27/2020 3:17:48 PM
Ash Dawes
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Me:
Arms open wide,
Bracing for impact.
Hoping for that leap
Of faith.
You:
Hesitant to cross
The great divide.
Calculating the distance
Between hope and safety.
Us:
Translating our fears
Into a language we both understand.
Holding hands as we
Walk along the high wire.
edited by AshleyDawes963 on 1/27/2020
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2/1/2020 12:02:16 AM
Jack Webster
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Have you considered using the image of Flying Trapeze instead of High Wire?
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