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1/8/2020 12:04:59 PM

AGNA AG
Posts: 1
If you have time walk alone
in the lanes of prohibited rhymes
choose a path make it taste better than wine
Love! love! for all we know open your soul and take a walk alone.
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1/11/2020 12:59:01 PM

LeRoy Baker
Posts: 2
part aphorism, part note to self, all ambition and joyous romp
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