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12/30/2019 11:21:50 PM Jenish Somadas Posts: 7	This is for a mono rhyme contest.. Colours of Mind Dark ones are dark, evil and bleak Tawny better, but helpless and weak Blue is active, yet maybe a freak Red is normal, common who seek Yellow is great, wise and unique White is best, divine and mystique Colours of skin, I didn’t speak Colours of minds that I bespeak
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1/14/2020 6:05:19 PM Warren Mbaht Posts: 10	Lovely poem. To me great, except for a couple of 9 syllable lines. That is being picky
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