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10/17/2019 8:06:46 PM Unknown Poet Posts: 5	Every day I see him walking through the halls He stops and talks to other girls And I feel my heart fall He looks at me and I feel small I want to tell him once in for all But something inside me stops And I know I’ve missed my call
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11/5/2019 4:39:22 PM Patrick Ituma Posts: 5	The thought of this fear of dear Makes my heart ache sincere It's like a life choice I see clear As my last time elapse draw near. -- Pkt
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10/29/2020 11:30:21 AM sristi verma Posts: 2	Every day I see him walking through the halls He stops and talks to other girls And I feel my heart fall He looks at me and I feel small I want to tell him once in for all But something inside me stops And I know I’ve missed my call. These were girls, far prettier than me, and that broke my gall. He entered my classroom in, And my traitor heart gave me a disastrous fling. His eyes were on me, and i know not what he did see, He smiled and the room lit. (time lapse) Heart pounding one day, I gathered my courage to say
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10/29/2020 2:46:34 PM Mary Kate Marozas Posts: 2	This poem is complete in just two stanzas. I don't think it needs more. It is profound the way it is. -- MaryKaithe Marozas aka - Elspeth Rapha
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11/11/2020 10:04:58 AM behzad asadi Posts: 1	This poem is complete in just two stanzas. I don't think it needs more. It is profound the way it is. -- download1music
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1/20/2021 2:18:33 AM bobfily Posts: 12	true story! edited by bobfily on 1/20/2021
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1/20/2021 2:31:46 AM Diana Aranovski Posts: 5	Too often, starting or finishing writing a poem is a challenge for me. Since I have an idea, I always lack the knowledge to add stanzas and build the correct method. The idea is lost during its implementation. Therefore, I often ask for help with editing at a special service, where you will understand me perfectly. I discovered this tool when I was first preparing for publication in a large edition; At that time I had to publish about 50 works. The magazine editor advised me to go there for editing help to get my work in order. edited by darel2020 on 4/22/2021
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6/17/2021 11:57:24 AM Eduardo Richardson Posts: 65	It seems to me that the question of whether or not to finish a verse is a matter of feeling at one time or another. If I understand that I should not finish the verse now, I do not finish and return to it later.
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1/27/2022 3:38:36 PM Owen Miers Posts: 3	www.moddingway.com/forums/thread-31648-post-173911.html#pid173911
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2/23/2022 3:07:47 PM Andy Lubale Posts: 1	Great thread, love how you helping to everyone who are trying to write! -- https://www.wiseessays.com/
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10/19/2022 8:08:39 PM EOTrees Myles Posts: 14	If this is the way that you, yourself would like to leave it then by all means do so. as for myself, I could be reediting this poem so many times that I would have 13 pages of editing but this is the way I do me and mine. edited by EOTrees on 10/19/2022 -- E.O.-Tree"s Myles
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