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10/9/2019 8:57:09 AM
Randal Newsom
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What?
What do you need?
Do you need redemption?
That's given by me.
In need of salvation?
That takes some work.
Life ever after?
It's one of the perks.
Knowledge and wisdom,
They come in due time.
Kindness and love,
But are they divine?
What you need is faith.
It's always been so.
It leads you to heaven
And one day you'll know.
edited by RBNEUS on 10/9/2019
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