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10/7/2019 7:06:52 PM
J.D. Cromwell
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I wrote this for my wife that has a chronic illness and has night terrors from ptsd. Still don’t know what to name it.
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Deathly living till dying breath.
Somber dreaming a lively death.
Body ailing, self enemy.
Ever changing the remedy.
Boldly living from open womb.
Never changing, to closing tomb.
Never living a normal life.
Ever planning for daily strife.
~J.D. Cromwell
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10/11/2019 6:07:22 PM
Jack Webster
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Title: Deathly Living
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