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8/1/2019 3:35:17 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Evil -by - Bob Atkinson evil creeps in slowly to minds of patron saints who feel themselves above reproach with agony born of hate hate derived from competition something useful in our time these imperious, useless people believe there lies no crime no crime in attacking those who don't believe in what they see as evident truths or life began with seed seed of the uncorrupt a seed which cannot be a seed which germinates with time by arrogance and greed while in truth we find no purity in a bunch who find not love in their hearts not gentle in their touch for no faith can survive as true or bold, sincere when love leaves the mind and hate becomes one's cheer **************** p { margin-bottom: 0.1in; line-height: 120%; }a:link { }
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8/1/2019 11:52:44 PM edubirdie Posts: 2	Nice Post
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8/2/2019 7:48:29 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Thanks edubirdie, Was trying to demonstrate the verb "to be" is, am, was, were, and a lot of "the's" aren't necessary as they degrade one's word crafting skills.
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