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7/31/2019 8:43:00 PM

Robert Moore
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What Am I

You heard the birds

as they sing outside.

They are not alone

You can see me from inside.

What am I?

I love being there

In the still of the morn.

You miss my beauty and

I feel forlorn.

What am I?

The sun shines on me

It feels so good,

Come share with me

I get lonely too.

What am I?

You cannot get around me

But I’ll let you through.

It will soon be over

Look for the blue.

What am I?

Made a movie about me

So long ago,

It wasn’t nice and

Was so untrue.

What am I?

Best view of me

Is from mountain top high.

You look down on me,

My beauty you can’t deny.

What am I?

Enjoy me for now

As the sun won’t let me lay.

Don’t worry my friends

I’ll be back another day.

I am the Fog.

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