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7/3/2019 5:11:34 PM

Miranda Hawley
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Life of Balance
Come to myside and hold my hand
As westroll through this maze called life.
I theteacher and you the student can travel side by side.
I see thewhole forest
And you onetree at a time.

Come to myside and hold my hand
As westroll through this maze called life.
I theforester and you the swimmer,
Can travelin harmony.
I see thelandscape
And you thebodies of water.

Come to myside and hold my hand
As westroll through this maze called life,
I the poetand you the mathematician.
I see thewords and rhymes
And younumbers and logic.

Come to myside and hold my hand
As westroll through this maze called life.
I themother figure and you the child.
I can learnfrom you how to have fun,
And you cangain wisdom and understanding from me.
Because allwork and no play reek!

In thisjourney of life our differences from day to day
Could infuseinto a glorious harmony.
My weaknessand your strength blend,
And eachpart is needed to make the whole.

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