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4/17/2019 3:39:37 PM
T.Peseckas Posts: 1
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It's one of my first poems I'm not good at writing also. I just want to try as many things as possible and see how it'll go.
The silence.. It‘s dark..Silent I close my eyes..Silence I hear him again I‘m feeling his ominous Yet such warm pressence He speaks to me.. And now he‘s silent.. I can‘t hear anything...Silence. I open my eyes..Red Red everywhere.. I close my eyes..Silence.. I can hear him with his faint voice He speaks to me, but I can‘t hear him Luminous light starts shining.. Silence..Silence again. I don‘t feel him anymore. I open my eyes..Silence.. edited by T.Peseckas on 4/17/2019 edited by T.Peseckas on 4/17/2019
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