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2/7/2019 5:07:23 PM

Shakhnoza Hakhberdieva
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About love ...

I closed eyes to picture you..
To feel hot embrace in a night
I seek the way behind of you
To ask a time" Is it all right ?"

Devils are away of my love
My prays,wish always save you
You are my aim for me ,and now
the heart of mine needs you..

The fortune wheel is rolling on
And ways are separated between
But dead love is suddenly born
Love is alive , feelings win!

In nights , long and long ,miss you..
loveless night,for me,is wrong!
I don't agree with feelings blue
I wait for you.I will strong!

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