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2/7/2019 11:12:01 AM

Kedar Ingale
Posts: 4
Nihilist in me
In back of my mind,I smell on my sins
I dwell on my essence ,purpose and wins
There were ,are and will be kings
In back of their minds ,they too reflect on things.
We all put our story in things,account them to tally with our wins.
Question is , are our stories of conquests,tempests and wins?
Or everything is just a map pointed with pins.
Paints of our stories ,the drawings
Are they some beauty pigeons or balds covered with wigs.

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