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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
1/22/2019 4:35:10 PM

Susan Jeavons
Posts: 5
Here and Now





In a drop of water

a universe.

In a peony

poetic verse.

In a child’s face

sweet purity.

In just one moment

eternity…
edited by susanmaree on 1/22/2019

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Susan Maree Jeavons
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