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1/16/2019 2:09:45 PM
levi johnson
Posts: 10
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The Belly of Being
Let your dreams
infuse you
quake you
remake you
Change your world
in design
in purpose
in entirety
Reverse your history
of mistakes
of thought
of existing
Become larger than life
to wisdom
to compete
to survive
Carve your personality
in motions
in minds
in stone
Preserve your destiny
of identity
of being
of rebirth
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1/16/2019 3:49:17 PM
Susan Jeavons
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Levi, this sounds like a plan, also a list poem. But I'm not sure. I like the flow and the positive attitude the whole poem exudes.
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Susan Maree Jeavons
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