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12/19/2018 3:56:41 PM
Heath Gebreek
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A dying star in the middle of nowhereWhere there's no water, earth nor airNo temple, no church, no mosque nor prayersStood as I saw what she wearsNothing but the shining waves of a brown hairThe green and the grey is a killer combination, I swearI'm helpless, this is not fair...
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