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9/8/2011 12:23:45 PM
James Unger Posts: 3
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America Heard Walt Whitman Singing
America heard you singing, Walt, And stopped to listen. That's our fault. Now our "poets" ever since Have written stuff that makes one wince.
They say you've been our nation's bard; We should have been more on our guard. Now our narcissistic screeds Blight the land like noxious weeds.
Self-absorption is the tool That makes a poet a goddam fool. You should be made to pay a fee For setting such a poor e.g..
Poetry should reach our minds But your stuff's just a rant in lines. You've dragged us back. We have no hope Of catching up with Donne or Pope.
As for your democratic bearing, I didn't see you greatly caring When your Captain's lust to ravage Gave the world collateral damage.
Even fig leaves teach us something. But leaves of grass cover nothing. I wish you were at least a clown, So we could laugh you out of town.
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9/19/2011 6:06:53 AM
E.J. Smith Posts: 1
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How true! And very well stated! E.J.
-- E.J. Smith
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