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9/7/2018 7:54:43 AM mark palmer Posts: 8	The calling birds and buzzing bees Their fragile lives are truly free, One by one the species is gone We have time but not too long. The lush hedgerows in bygone days A passing of life, they go their way As seasons change with warming skies From flippant tales, come our lies. The morning chorus, a sing of songs In waking light these songs belong As Mother Nature quietly cries Man looks on and shuts his eyes. Woods are quiet the songs are missed We pray to God a second wish, As life returns our hurt undone She cries no more and the damage none. edited by mpalmer123 on 9/7/2018
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9/7/2018 7:59:42 AM mark palmer Posts: 8	I would appreciate any feedback as this was a quick one and not sure if it is a poem?
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