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9/5/2018 8:03:57 AM
Janine Ingleby
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A short poem that I am struggling to title. Any ideas and/or improvements are very welcome.
This is the first time I have ever shared my poetry so am keen to get some feedback. Thanks
Sit words on a pedestal
Smell ink of dreamy notion
Breathe between the syll ab les
Bite poetic devotion
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