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9/4/2018 11:14:59 AM
mark palmer
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Her blue sassy dress dances thefloor
That sultry smile still the same
With playful laughs she twists her hair,
Our feelings high her knowing smile
Plays my heart to curvy seductions.
A face of interest, the gleam in her eye
With a swing of hips, then biting her lips
She blows a kiss her charm of old,
As her infectious laugh fills theroom
She cups my face and we dance a little more.
Her passions primed, a Lady indeed,
The sincere thanks for a helping hand,
She is happy in life and savvy to the world
With a show of grit she says how it is, for
The Lady has style and always a joy to me.
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9/5/2018 12:24:58 PM
mark palmer
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This is not about one single person but more of imagination and little parts of people I have known. Not sure how the reader sees it?
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