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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
8/12/2018 2:49:34 PM

Via B. Real
Posts: 1
Girl, Love, Yourself







Girl,




You've come so far and passed so many troublesome tests. Those who know your testimony can attest and one day you'll share it with the rest. Continue to be yourself, continue to grow, and continue to live by your heart. Block out negative thinkers and naysayers and stay on your path of purpose. Be smart. The real will recognize your efforts and those who are not meant will slowly fade away... stay true to what matters, keep your heart open and pray well wishes even for those who don't wish you well or mention your name when they pray. Pure hearts will attract other pure hearts which will, in turn, surround you with loyalty. You, just wait and see. Remember sweet child of God... this is all apart of your destiny.




Love,

Yourself
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9/3/2018 11:26:42 AM

Jack Webster
Posts: 255
This isn't a poem. It is a self-help affirmation.
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