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5/18/2018 4:46:59 AM
Lucia Siwela Posts: 3
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Starring into nothingness Overwhelmed by confusion Emptyness so terrifying Thoughts wondering through the darkness Emotions scattered everywhere Shadows peeping for some light I'm captured in my own thoughts Imprisoned by ever-changing emotions So much happening all at once But nothing makes sense How do I escape such darkness edited by siwelaluu on 5/18/2018
-- Luu
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