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4/12/2018 4:16:16 PM

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Music
A simple rhythm written on paper

Painted with invisible colors on a canvas

That can only be seen with our ears

Inspiring the souls of many

Getting people through times of need

Bringing hearts together

And lighting fires of creativity

When it’s just sounds put together

Written on a piece of paper.

For the "Word Vision Poetry II" Contest

Sponsored by Vermillion Scythe

4/10/2018

(I hope you like this but I think I need some help)
edited by CCL1031 on 4/12/2018

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-Sincerely, the Truth

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