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3/20/2018 7:50:52 PM Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh Posts: 11	Life is just a test of faith To see who is worthy of The grace of Jesus, the Lord almighty, And his kingdom of heaven in the stars, Where the fallen believers rest in peace. There is no other reason There is no point but judgement, To see who won’t curse the Lord’s holy name And to see who will do right while tempted By the evil one Satan down below Jesus welcomes the righteous And casts away those who aren’t, But we can be forgiven for mistakes If we have faith in the Messiah Christ Forever, and never lose sight of Him. But I, myself, the writer, Am starting to fall slowly. I am struggling, the pressure too great. I am being crushed by the weight of sins. I want my painful existence to end. But until I die, I keep Trying to regain balance. -- -Sincerely, the Truth
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3/20/2018 7:52:04 PM Correagndslkhsj Loaifhshfasjkh Posts: 11	For the Seven-ten Contest, ends April 5, please reply quick, before contest is over. -- -Sincerely, the Truth
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