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3/10/2018 8:34:29 PM

Mona Motwani
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UNSTOPPABLE
Hey little girl!
World warned her,
'bout dangers of the road,
Yet she picked one!

She met the hell,
Met the noise,
Met the yell,
But by her choice!

She stumbled,
She crumbled,
She fumbled,
Yet she chose to walk!

She met the rains,
She met the hails,
But been through draughts,
She took bliss in every storm!

She saw the dreams
Turned into nightmares,
She was a warrior,
And fought them all.

She walked and walked,
It was long and tiring,
Dark and scary,
Road she took,
Was never taken before,
It was her all new venture!

She was guided a lot,
Protected a lot,
Told about dangers of unknown,
But yet here she was...
Dealing by herself,
Not answerable to anyone,
For her roads,
Her wounds and sores,
Were all her very own!

And here she was...
Yet so much happy,
For not being told,
How to be bold,
On long silent roads!

And here she is realising,
How much untouched and pious
have these roads been lately,
Carefree she walks,
Discovering ,the truth of road,
The lies of world,
And the joy of her life!

Now she is...
Unaffected,
Unstoppable,
by anymore noises,
No more vulnerable to world,
She embraces simplicity of roads
Over complexity of other's views!!

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