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5/17/2010 4:30:49 PM
Justin Street Posts: 2
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Am I happy Today I was asked Am I My head is in the past
Every moment I ever smiled Every feeling I ever said Truth and lies filed Heartache only fed
Every kiss we shared Every look she gave She is tangled in the air That I will take to my grave
Every feeling thought She showed pure to me But every time we fought I wanted to be free
Foolish and stupid Is what I am Hate the thing cupid Through choices I swam
But what an impression I never the same forever Even though a freshman My choice wasn’t clever
With hearts in hand I walk alone I will never demand From what I must atone
Am I happy Today I was asked On impulse I dreamed her memory I smiled, I laughed
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