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12/6/2017 12:57:27 PM

Riley Hood
Posts: 7
Unravel me into a simple thread.
Re-knit my emotions like a blanket over my bare chest.
Clothe me
In memories and admiration.
Weave conscience and judgement around every unspoken word.
Dress me
In the most human of robes.
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