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11/22/2017 5:01:27 PM
keith osborne
Posts: 59
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A dog and a frog
(with the names of Bull)
sit on a log
abutting a synagogue
drinking eggnog
until they are full
Suddenly agog
(by a fog in their bog
that makes them slog
like a cog
when they jog)
begin a dialogue
with a demagogue hedgehog
"Start a blog monologue
regarding this smog"
voiced to the hog by Bull
"You've had too much grog"
stated the hedgehog
offering a prologue
raising self up with a pull
"and regarding this blog
I have a backlog
know just analog
and expect my payment in wool"
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11/25/2017 12:59:57 PM
Stephen Wilson-Floyd
Posts: 49
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I like the whimsy of this. It reads like a little unpretentious vignette. It reminds me of Lewis Carroll. It is good to read poems from people who don't think all poetry must be serious. Best wishes!
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