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11/17/2017 9:28:06 AM
Jane Shields
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I've searched far and wide, through flatlands and hills
Braved jungles and highlands for the one to fill
An empty so hollow, it echoes my soul
Who can rebuild my heart 'till again it feels whole
For surely there must be, another who seeks
To fill their own empty until it brims with me
My passion flows over, for the one who needs
A passion just like mine so greedy they'll feed
We'll scream at the mountains
The moon it will blush
As passions explode
Changing mountains to dust
There's plenty to share, so I'll never run out
I will fill my own empty of that there's no doubt
We'll share an embrace, but we'll take it too far
Time and time again no matter where we are
Our love will not trickle, but rage like a storm
Compared to you and I the world it will mourn
For pleasures we'll find, the embraces lose count
We'll hold on in pure greed and leave nothing out
We'll scream at the mountains
The moon it will blush
As passions explode
Changing mountains to dust
We'll scream at the mountains
The moon it will blush
As passions explode
Changing mountains to dust
Scream at the mountains...
Scream at the mountains...
Scream at the mountains...
Scream....
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