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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
11/9/2017 1:16:11 PM

Vermillion Scythe
Posts: 4 		Bliss

is a place

where the ground is made of clouds

sounds around are crafted from serenity

anxiety is unknown

and impossibility is phantasmic

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11/9/2017 1:16:41 PM

Vermillion Scythe
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