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10/26/2017 5:04:44 AM

Michael Hayward
Posts: 9

I can
I will protect you,
from the evil in this world.

I will always catch you,
whenever you fall in life, or on your bum.

I will guide you,
which path's best to take and choices to make.

I will adore you,
everyday for the rest of my life.

I will encourage you,
to succeed in life and do the best you can.

I will comfort you and give you peace,
when you feel down and can't carry on anymore.

I will provide the very best for you,
all the day's of you're life.

I will love you,
forever and always since the beginning of time.

But I can't do any of these things,
so I will ask the One who can.

I pray that God will surround you with His favor as with a shield,
Amen.
edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017
edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017
edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017

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