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10/22/2017 9:49:56 AM

Himanshu Dixit
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... Mehnat....
Tum jo ye pdh rhe ho ise padho nhi socho...

Is andhere me rhna teri bhle takdeer ho pr teri mehnat ko sooraj ka sawera chahiye...
Is smy teri bhle dhumil pdi tasweer ho pr teri mehnat ko khwabo ki bulandi chahiye.

Tu parishram kr k kismat ko bhi apni mod de...
Mn me socha hone ka sapna sajona chor de...
Khwabo ki duniya se ab tu uth or bahar nikal...
Kr nirantar shram shwaym ko hone na de tu vifal...
Hai vifalta safalta ka phla kdm tu jaan le...
Apni manzil tk pahuchne ki tu mn me than le.
Barish me jb aam pakshi apna asra dhundhta h.
Mushkilo ko paar kr baaj megho k upar udta h...
Hr raah me katein bichane ko milenge saikdo...
Pr mn ko rkho drid hatao muskile age bdho...
In mushkilo ki raah ko ydi paar tu kr jaega....
Sansaar ki uchi se uchi hr bulandi paega.....

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Himanshu.222

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