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8/28/2017 10:34:30 PM

Grace Englebreeze
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I had an awesome poem
Written in my head

Writing poems isn't my thing

So I thought it up instead

The poem had a kitten

A purple kitten too

The kitten had a mitten

That was completely blue

The kitty's blue mitten

Fell into the sea

While the poor little kitten

Cried in melancholy

Then the brave little kitten

Dove into the sea

To try to find the mitten

That made it happy

We waited and waited

In so much despair

Our fear escalated

So we said a little prayer

And the kitten came back up

With the mitten on it's paw

How great! What luck!

That the kitten didn't fall!

And that was the poem

Written in my head

Writing poems isn't my thing

So I thought it up instead
edited by Grace E. Englebree on 8/28/2017

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