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8/10/2017 4:13:40 PM keith osborne Posts: 59	Nocturnal Eminence Warrior to dark's most daunting dreams savior from thoughts that run too deep Terrify, not one dares it seems brings panacea to night's sleep Beacon for flailing ships asea, the Ana of fifty shades Grey Beauty saving the nocturne beast keeps subconscious demons at bay Catches every breath with her smile as summer's sun, a heart it warms Intensity not seen awhile quells the worst of fierce thunderstorms Her touch, akin to the spring's rain gently blooming buds to flowers Still, mental images are vain ne'er experience her powers Shan't romance, seduce, love, or hold hear her voice, feel her aura's beams Suppose I could, though not so bold so she must stay within my dreams
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8/22/2017 1:01:19 PM Dean Wood Posts: 31	This is lovely. Nothing I can add.
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