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7/25/2017 5:24:31 PM

keith osborne
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Warrior to dark's most daunting dreams

savior from thoughts that run too deep

Terrify, not one dares it seems

brings panacea to night's sleep

Beacon for flailing ships asea,

the Ana of fifty shades Grey

Beauty saving the nocturne beast

keeps subconscious demons at bay

Catches every breath with her smile

as summer's sun, a heart it warms

Intensity not seen awhile

quells the worst of fierce thunderstorms

Her touch, akin to the spring's rain

gently blooming buds to flowers

Still, mental images are vain

ne'er experience her powers

Shan't romance, seduce, love, or hold

hear her voice, feel her aura's beams

Suppose I could, though not so bold

so she must stay within my dreams

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