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7/25/2017 5:20:15 PM
keith osborne
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A flame containing exponential fervor and luster
scorches a visage through the cerebellum
a scintilla of contact melts the epidermis
utilize every fluid ounce quenching the burning ache
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7/28/2017 3:45:29 PM
keith osborne
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Alas, Laura, I can not extinguish said flame by revealing it's source. Thank you taking a little time to review my post and noticing it's tinges, I appreciate that.
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