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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
7/24/2017 6:49:40 PM

Angeline Vine
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I think you could remove the word 'but' from your poem. Good Luck!
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7/24/2017 10:13:39 PM

Jeremy F.
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Thank you!
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