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7/15/2017 7:07:18 PM
keith osborne Posts: 59
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Lake Cliffs of Erie
Standing on the edge of a cliff
toking a smooth fat spliff
waiting to catch sight of a skiff
Floating it's way on by
Watching the majestic girl soar
no longer a beast of lore
wish for increasingly more
She passes a look on the fly
Brown with white head and tail
power that will never fail
enchanting how she sets sail
Makes me start to cry
Bounding stag hidden by ivied hoods
sneaky 'lil squirrel dashing with his goods
amber kits darting through the boxwoods
Violet western sun in the sky edited by hempleaves13 on 7/15/2017
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8/3/2017 5:06:03 AM
Lineikosen Posts: 1
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Just superb and loved this
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