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7/7/2017 9:15:03 AM

Wardah Ahmed
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He is the moon

He is the matured moon in the night
Providing positive energy like light flowing
His confidence is his aura glowing
In the dark his glow is bright
And indeed a splendid sight

Like the moon he will never drop
His purpose is driven by his top ambition
To help and love unselfishly is his mission
That no other can attempt to stop
For like the moon he rises to the top

Like a new moon with joy he smiles
And touches many lives so dear
With a smile he lights up from ear to ear
He is contempt with a temporary solitary style
Through an eclipse he'll join his sun in due while

Like the moon he is perfectly composed
Watching over dear ones as he arose high above
All he has to give is so much love
And from this his generosity flows
From his kind nature to all whom he knows

He is the matured moon in the night
Providing positive energy like light flowing
His confidence is his aura glowing
In the dark his glow is bright
And indeed a splendid sight
edited by Red Roze on 7/7/2017
edited by Red Roze on 7/7/2017

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