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7/3/2017 10:53:16 AM
Ro Powery Posts: 1
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Shackle me to my car
bind me in my books,
tied up in time
I suffocate.
Strangled, mangled, rooted in loose soil,
neglected nutrients flourish elsewhere.
Quicksand rituals reign,
owed worth, work only to make it worse
I worry.
Bourgeois burglars burp the eggshells on which I waltz
seamlessly slipping through the cracks
I cannot win.
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