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6/13/2017 1:20:54 AM

quinoa
Posts: 6

Hello everyone! I woud like to show my poem in English.
I hope you won't be strict to me.

Angel's dream

it's difficult to hear
what my soul want.
But I'll try.
And maybe I'll hear
how the wings appear behind my back.

I want to say a lot
But I don't have many words
to say to you what I feel
But I'll try,
And maybe I'll find
the right words

Every line of my note I will suffer
Every sign I will see
To touch your soul.
It will be impossible for me.
But I'll try
And maybe I'll pazzle my soul in
the overal picture of the universe.

guinoa
2017/06/11

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