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6/12/2017 7:35:34 PM

Madeleine Riha
Posts: 3

When We Fight

Darkness, depression, deepest despair
My heart sinks into the abyss
This conflict with you seems so unfair
Your loving touch I sorely miss
There’s naught to blame when things go awry
We came from different walks of life
Our love continues to make us try
One day I will become your wife
Knowing each other is taking long
Uncovering our mystic thoughts
At times we get our messages wrong
But we still love each other lots
edited by mriha on 6/12/2017
edited by mriha on 6/12/2017

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